Final Free Hugs Campaign

Let's Share Love and Happiness

There was a man conducting free hugs campaign to share love and happiness. The tall man who has long hair walked along the street and bring “free hugs” sign. At first, the people did not have a good response to him. Maybe they thought that the man was crazy. No one wanted to close with him. Then, some minutes later there was a grandmother came to him and hug him. It was the turning point caused the free hug to begin to happen. After the grandmother, there was a girl who wanted to hug him. And one by one person wanted to hug him.

After that, some people joined to bring the “free hugs” sign. They brought the “free hug” sign along the street and invited the people to hug with them. Many people had a good response with this activity.

Suddenly, the police came and stopped the campaign. They did not give any permission to them to hug there. I think it was because the police though that this activity disturbed the people who walked on the street. After the police stopped the campaign, the people tried to submit the signature. It means that the people who put the signature supported “free hug” activity. There were many people who interested with this part. One by one person put their signature there. From 83, 136, 572 and finally he got 10.000 signatures. In the end, the man and the people hugged each other. They looked so happy. People who did not know each other, at the end become knowing each other. It made they were aware each other.

Free hug makes people realize that togetherness is very important. When they hugged each other, they realize that they are not alone in this world. With a hug, we can feel more comfortable and more confident because we think that the people who hug us are giving strength to us. Free hug is also one way to share our love and happiness to others because when you hug others, it means that you love them and they will be happy because they think that you are care about them.

So, do not be doubt to share your hug. :)

Outline Of Free Hugs

By : I Putu Yogi Agustia Pratama

Topic sentence       : A free hug is like hugs from other people.

                                 (maybe you can add some word which can show the specific aspect or to make it more interesting. Example: A free hug is hug from other people which makes us share our love and happiness.)

Major supporting sentence 1    :  We see where a man who looks like crazy carrying banners that read free hugs.

Minor supporting sentence (1) : -  First, a man looks crazy with the banners that run in a city, but that man to do invite all people to campaign for free hugs.

                                                    (maybe you need to make this sentence simpler and please try to put a full stop or period.)

-  Where the presence of free hugs we could feel the love in the arms of each other and also get a sense of togetherness.

(I think you don’t need to put this sentence because it’s not really support the major sentence.)

Major supporting sentence 2    :  Then, there is the old women who first embraced that man, out of which began to arise to bright light and the people began to think to do free hugs.

Minor supporting sentence (2)  : -  From grandmother's arms is clearly visible affection given radiance so that it can attract one by one people to participate do free hugs.

-  Then, everyone hugged each other and to make each other happy         ambience in the city.

  (I don't really understand what do you mean by this sentence. I mean the word "make each other happy ambience in the city". I think there was something wrong with it.

Major supporting sentence 3    :  When many people have embraced each other and bring the paper that said free hugs, there are several policemen who dismiss their activities and ban the people hugging.

Minor supporting sentence (3)  : -  But it doesn’t to make those people to stop hugging and doesn’t make the first man to give up free hugs to everyone.

                                                   (It better is the sentence, "But, it doesn't make those people to stop hugging and doesn't make the first man give up doing free hugs to everyone.")

Major supporting sentence 4    :  Then, the man signatures request to everyone who participated in the       activities of free hugs.

Minor supporting sentence (4)  : -  The man get 10,000 signatures from the people and able to convince the police would mean that hug and assure that the hug is a sense of compassion for the people who loved like their own family.

                                                      (maybe you have to separate it into some sentences.)

Major supporting sentence 5    :  Finally, the police agree with the free hugs campaign and the officers also huge each other with all of people.

Minor supporting sentence (5)  : -  In the end everyone was hugging each other.

Concluding sentence   :   We can start to hug each other people, because the arms of a love for each other
                                      and will also lead to a sense of family with each other.